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Mike Newman
at 04:25, 12 Apr 2005
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A few poems
here's two poems i wrote, they have to do with my attempt to become a filmmaker, let me know what ya think...
1) Translucent dreams always seem to find A way to scheme their way into my mind
2) Delusions have invaded my mind Like a plague devouring my soul I try to rewind the time but only find That I am nothing more than a fool So here I sit, stuck in hell A constant yell screams inside my head To be dead must be better than living In this unforgiving world that builds up my frustration As I search for a justification of my own existence Persistence and Assistance is what I need Resistance is what I receive When it all comes down to it Everything is bull**** piled upon bull**** The things I try so hard for elude me While the deluded things come to me so easily What the f*ck??? Duck, Duck, Chuck, Goose Moose So here I am in a caboose living in a world that doesn't exist And even though I resist the temptation to give up I try to live up to my goals of succeeding and not being a fool I can only wonder how long this **** will last Will I pass or will I fail? Is this heaven or is this hell? I guess only time will tell...
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cjs
at 06:55, 12 Apr 2005
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YES?
Did you see YES already? How was the poetry?
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razberie
at 12:32, 26 Apr 2005
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the frustrations of being an artist
dreams - a key reason for an artist to create
the frustration of impossible dreams, love turn into energy
persistence and assistence help, encouragement of course
yet passion is essential
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edward
at 16:50, 7 Jul 2005
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Regarding Mike Newman's two poems
I thought your poems were really good - I really enjoyed them. It takes a lot of guts to share one's poetry with the world. Good luck in your career.
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sally potter
at 10:19, 4 Aug 2005
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belated response
i have been meaning for a while to add my agreement to 'edward'...thank you for posting your heartfelt poems and good luck with all future work.
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